Sophia Rosemann's Digital Portfolio
Food Insecurity Essay
In this assignment, we wrote a research essay about food insecurity in America and how it negatively affects the citizens. In this essay we learned how to find reliable resources, make in site citations, and a bibliography. In this process I also learned how to use feedback from my peers to improve my writing. I also learned how to organize my writing to get my point acrossed in the best way possible.
In this essay, I am really proud about how I was able to utilize my resources in my essay to convey a point. I feel like I was able to get my point acrossed in an organized and understandable way. I also think that I could've done more revisions to my essay. In this assignment, I used cooperation, evidence, and refinement. I used evidence throughout my essayto help prove my point, I used cooperation with my partners to get feedback on my essay, and I used refinement to make my essay better.